1)Mayor Richard Wrigley expressed in confidence that the Gubernatorial Debate, which begins at 7:30 p.m. this evening, will have a positive effect on his candidacy. He added, “Governor Red Davidson is a master of dirty politics, but I won’t take any of his bologna.” (4)
2)For her birthday, the nine year old girl invited five good friends over for ice cream and cake. The chocolate cake was so tasty that any of the children would have ate it all, but they carefully divided it between themselves. (4)
3)The new head of the Journalism Department, Dr. Deborah Dunwoody, Ph.D., recently bought a house at 6 Riverside Dr. in San Mateo, a city in San Francisco bay area. (4)
4)Rome, Italy – All around the world, Roman Catholics today listened as the pope delivered his homily. (3)
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1) your first two changes are not needed; p.m. or this evening (not both -- that's redundant); baloney, not bologna. You got effect and Governor right. (+2)
ReplyDelete2) 9-year-old girl, among themselves. "Any" is correct; "would have ate it" is not. (+1)
3) lowercase "journalism department" (it's not a proper name); Dr. or Ph.D. (not both); Bay Area. Address edits are correct. (+2)
4) Look up Rome dateline; others are correct (+2)
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