Original:
This offer is for a limit time. Prices, offers and some menu items may vary at participting locations and subject to changes without notice.$15.00 minimum delivery order . delivery charge may apply Copyright 2010 Via Mia Pizza. Via Via Pizza is a federally protected tradmark
Corrections:
This offer is for a limited time only. Prices and some offers may vary at participating locations and subject to change without notice.A minimum charge of $15.00 for delivery orders. Via Pizza is a federally protected trademark. Copyright 2010 via Mia Pizza.
http://viamia.com/
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limited, participating, trademark: 3x4=12 points
ReplyDeleteHere's how I'd correct the delivery sentence:
$15.00 minimum delivery order; delivery charge may apply.
The company name is Via Mia Pizza, so your last correction is off.